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posted December 4th, 2014, 4:44 pm

there's sexy Zeff in a bikini on the photo :^)

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December 4th, 2014, 4:44 pm

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The End of Chapter 1: My name is the worst

I might go on a little hiatus...

06/12/14 Edit:
Sorry, I'm just a little whining bitch, I just need to get my stuff together and improve instead of whining.

05/12/14 Edit:
I don't know why so many people unfollowed my comic? Is it because of the hiatus or that the end of the chapter was lame etc? It's really sad for my cause I put my heart into this webcomic and on the most important day which is completing the first chapter of the story, so many people left. Just to say if feels like it's really not good enough ehh

Even though, thanks for those who are supporting me no matter what! Love ya <333

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December 4th, 2014, 4:50 pm

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SO MAD AT THIS

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December 4th, 2014, 6:10 pm

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@Noir-x: hahahahaha! Yes, exactly. ;D

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December 4th, 2014, 6:15 pm

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Guess I was right when I was getting all kinds of bad feelings about this guy... That picture has me fearing the worst. DX (And he's been carrying it around in his wallet? That doesn't sound creepy. No, not at all. >:|) And I guess I was also right about the cliffhanger. ^^; Guh. I. Want. To. Know. MORE! haha... Of course, if you feel you need to take a break, I'll manage. Somehow. ;]

I was very pleased when Hyacinth slapped away his hand, though. Good for him! :D

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December 4th, 2014, 8:17 pm

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His ex is disgusting. Not sure about the other guy though... If he's turning his head away, perhaps he might be a sympathetic/helpful character later on.
/ponders

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December 4th, 2014, 10:01 pm

CX1989XC

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black mail alert!

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December 5th, 2014, 2:07 am

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O mój Bo¿e. Mo¿esz mnie nazwaæ z³em, ale ten Zeff nawet mi siê podoba XD Chocia¿ mo¿e jestem w wielkim b³êdzie, poniewa¿ nie wiem jak siê rozstali z Cyntkiem :'c

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December 5th, 2014, 8:15 am

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I love your comic. The art is very well done and the story is progressing at a rate that some might call slow, but this is the first chapter, it is only natural to ease into the story gently and provide all the key information before things start to inter-mesh, snowball and pick up speed. Don't worry about the people who unfavorited too much. Your story looks like its worth waiting for, and I'll definately be staying around to read the comic through to the end.

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December 5th, 2014, 9:49 am

Laudie (Guest)

Just found it!

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What a great story line so far, and the art is amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter, you got me hooked!!

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December 5th, 2014, 12:29 pm

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I support you! I love your work! I won't unfollow you, even though you're on hiatus (maybe). I love you too! <3

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December 5th, 2014, 7:07 pm

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In response to losing followers...

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I'm going to be blunt with you, since you seem to be wondering why people have left. Honestly, I believe it's your characterization of the antagonists in this comic. It's so...over-the-top villainy that it's actually kind of painful to read. It's too transparent and doesn't make for very good writing. It's like you're holding a big sign above him saying "THIS GUY! THIS IS THE BAD GUY! HE'S BAD! BOO! DON'T LIKE HIM!" I'm not saying every antagonist needs to be sympathetic, but all of your "bad" characters have been so black-and-white that it's entirely unrealistic. It started with the girlfriend, and now the ex-boyfriend...it's just not the best writing. I don't want you to take this as I'm bashing you, because that's not my intention. I just feel that, as a writer myself, it's best to know your weaknesses. Your art is lovely and you obviously care a lot about your work, but your storytelling and characterization could use some improvement.

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December 5th, 2014, 8:17 pm

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@Japanazi: Thank you for the critic! I've never considered myself a good writer - that's why I was always afraid to start posting anything story-related. Although it'll sound silly what I'm just going to say but I'm making those characters overly-villain for a purpose. Maybe it's too bold or maybe I should have waited and post a whole story when it's completed. However thank you very much for telling me this, I'll learn and try to be more aware of that flaw of mine. :)

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December 6th, 2014, 5:29 pm

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It's true that the villains are a bit over the top. But it doesn't really bother me. I like over the top villains! My background is in film animation and we have a lot of those in animated movies or series. However it's true that in a story like this one set in the real world where the focus is on the characters' relationships, it might not be the most realistic approach.

In real life, assholes don't really show so easily how much they suck. They're hypocrits and usually like appearing like good guys most of the time.

Also it's good to keep in mind that in real life, even the biggest jerks have good sides to them. There's no black and white. A man who is a huge jerk at work and sexually harrasses his employees might have a disabled little brother he loves and takes care of. It doesn't excuse his behavior at work but just goes to show people have many sides, and when you show good sides to your villains and bad sides to your heroes, it's just makes them more complex and interesting characters.

That being said, I've always thought you do a good job, I love the art and characters and it always makes my day when you post a new page. Keep up the nice work and thanks for the comic!

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December 7th, 2014, 2:11 pm

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I love Hyacinth's design! *^* And I really like your art in general, thanks a lot for your work. I'll follow this wherever it will go!

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